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<ry60003333> i was too busy waiting for this dollar i found on the floor to respawn
<Avail> so it's pretty cool to throw my penis around
Overall it's a really nice design. I like it But a little bit of extra eye candy would go a long way. Simply making the navigation links respond to mouse hovering makes the site feel alive and it's a very simple feature to add.
Ambokile: What exactly do you mean by colour the navigation links based on the user's current position?
<_^_> this community has really collapsed<_^_> it is like a shitty version of friendster for washed up nerds
I award you one 'Ambokile' coin:
Font on the main menu is a bit weird, might just need to be bold or somethin idunnoNot sure what happened here:Something not working properly?Other notes unrelated to the actual design:Slogan shouldn't be plural, people looking for this type of work usually have an idea they need created.IMHO the 'About' paragraph will do no good for your company. I would reword it to not emphasize on the fact that you are an amateur company created for the purposes of competition, doesn't really give faith to potential customers, nomsain? Write about how everyone is so into their jobs and you met eachother and were like ya lets start a company to continue doing what we love, blahblahblah, something like that. Just currently if I saw that site and read that paragraph I'd even wonder if you were actually selling anything or if this was just a demo site for competition."we're right for eachother" each other is always two wordsA lot of the wording is really strange in these paragraphs, if you want I could go through it completely and mark it all, but since Im not even sure if you want critique in those areas I'll leave it be for now
The preview was working when I first visited the site, then something about switching tabs or opening it again and it showed that. Refreshing fixed. Just using the latest Firefox. And idunno, who did you have analyze it? Unless that competition is really famous and a big deal, if it was me I wouldn't apply my brand to a "young business" anythingEDIT - Another thing with the design, the contact us part really should be changed. Not sure how exactly, but:Doesn't look very good
EDIT - I didn't even realize you could click on samantha's picture to get taken to her bio, that should be made clearer in the design imo